Comments on: ~3.15~

By: Mongoose

Mongoose — Sat, 02 Feb 2008 22:45:39 +0000

“The smell’s strongest over that way,” really seems like something that Michael would be more likely to say. Stephen hasn’t had any lines that make him seem witty or clever.

By: wolfbane83

wolfbane83 — Wed, 30 Jan 2008 22:51:03 +0000

YAY!!!! My favorite story is back! Thanks AE!!!! Great update as usual.

By: Sadiana

Sadiana — Wed, 30 Jan 2008 21:10:35 +0000

Yay, Tribe’s back!

By: SilverFox

SilverFox — Tue, 29 Jan 2008 21:17:30 +0000

Drew: Do you have a scroll-wheel mouse and Windows? Try holding the Ctr bitton and rolling the scroll-wheel. I have to do this with most webpages anymore.

By: Drew

Drew — Tue, 29 Jan 2008 18:13:07 +0000

I love this story. I even love how it’s in short little bits. I wish the text was easier to read on the website.

By: The Cloaked Stranger

The Cloaked Stranger — Tue, 29 Jan 2008 12:15:32 +0000

I love that Michael reacts to the world as if it’s a story, with predictable features like trap-door bookcases. And Stephen makes great comedic relief.

By: Heather Layne

Heather Layne — Tue, 29 Jan 2008 06:19:38 +0000

“The question is, where did she go?” Michael asked.

“The smell’s strongest over that way,” Stephen said, pointing to a corner of the room.

“No, I mean, when she left,” Michael said.

Hahahaha…! Awesome line.