Comments on: ~1.5~

By: Alexandra Erin

Alexandra Erin — Wed, 29 Aug 2007 04:02:40 +0000

Crikey… thought I fixed all those. The post editor’s developed a tendency to eat line breaks.

Crispy — Wed, 29 Aug 2007 03:52:24 +0000

Small typo: Mama and Nick have lines of dialogue in the same paragraph. (”She’d love her daughter…”) Shouldn’t they be separate paragraphs?

Nice story. It’s interesting having it in short chunks like this.

Caduceuskun — Mon, 27 Aug 2007 20:31:27 +0000

Glad I noticed this. Enjoying it so far, but I can’t imagine how frustrating it must be to write exactly 333 words for every chapter. So… good job.

Hydrargentium — Mon, 27 Aug 2007 14:45:00 +0000

Typo: “so I’m probably not remember everything right” — should be ‘remembering’?

Great story so far, Lexy. You’ve definitely got me wondering about Woe.