Comments on: ~1.15~ http://tribe.fantasyinminiature.com/arc-01/1-15 urban fantasy in miniature Tue, 07 Sep 2010 00:09:28 -0700 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.6 hourly 1 By: Dave http://tribe.fantasyinminiature.com/arc-01/1-15/comment-page-1#comment-68 Dave Mon, 24 Sep 2007 09:12:23 +0000 http://tribe.alexandraerin.com/?p=18#comment-68 "I also don’t where she isn’t" - word missing ("know"). Presume you'll have to drop a word elsewhere if you correct that. “I also don’t where she isn’t” – word missing (”know”). Presume you’ll have to drop a word elsewhere if you correct that.

]]> By: Alexandra Erin http://tribe.fantasyinminiature.com/arc-01/1-15/comment-page-1#comment-45 Alexandra Erin Tue, 11 Sep 2007 15:06:14 +0000 http://tribe.alexandraerin.com/?p=18#comment-45 @Lily: sometimes having a specific framework to write in makes it easier, at least for me. The first half dozen chapters all ran long enough that I pretty much split them in two, but after that I had it down. @Lily: sometimes having a specific framework to write in makes it easier, at least for me. The first half dozen chapters all ran long enough that I pretty much split them in two, but after that I had it down.

]]> By: seraphina http://tribe.fantasyinminiature.com/arc-01/1-15/comment-page-1#comment-44 seraphina Tue, 11 Sep 2007 13:23:11 +0000 http://tribe.alexandraerin.com/?p=18#comment-44 crazehness!! i like Woe ^.^ crazehness!!

i like Woe ^.^

]]> By: Lily http://tribe.fantasyinminiature.com/arc-01/1-15/comment-page-1#comment-43 Lily Tue, 11 Sep 2007 12:08:51 +0000 http://tribe.alexandraerin.com/?p=18#comment-43 stranger and stranger I am quite curious where this story will go from here. is it hard to keep it to just 333 words? If I could write I don't know if I could do it. stranger and stranger I am quite curious where this story will go from here. is it hard to keep it to just 333 words? If I could write I don’t know if I could do it.

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